I'm not sure if you're still interested in my VN, but I have made a few changes in it, including some tweaking to make the text easier to read. I have also, credited you, in the 'About' section, for having given me the suggestion.
Hey, no problem, dude. You get to it when you get to it. I just thought you'd like to know I took your comment to heart. You're not the only one who had trouble reading the text. I changed the dialogue box's color and the text, at least to me and the others that I've asked, it's a lot easier to read now, so yeah, whenever you get around to it, just let me know.