I'd definitely agree with the comments encouraging you to expand out the story a little more if you get the chance. The game and the summary just didn't seem to mesh, maybe because we don't get to see Iphigenia's difficulty in fitting in. I've really enjoyed what you have so far though, so I hope I can get an update if you do make more, or see other work from you in the future!
Thank you for the feedback! That's definitely something I wanted to explore more and I wish I had had a little more time to get to it! I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it though and I hope you feel the same about my future work ^^ <3