It's not bad, but a good start to build upon. The maze at the beginning, and the keys in the office were just a drag, and there are a few typos and grammatical issues that felt jarring.
Hmm, Yeah you got every mistake I did in the writing of this 10 time better than me xD, for the Keys I did fix the issue of it being hard to get but still need to fix some more stuff to update the game, And thanks for the honest review :D I will try my best to do better in the future
