I think the game is alright so far. my main complaint would be the repetitiouse grinding for money and affection. especially when you have to work with someone 5 times and it's always the same with no variation just to get them 10 points. Also I am unsure if it was just me or if the game isn't that far yet, but I only ever gotten one chance to really makea difference with the second shoplady even where I had enough toughness for cunnilingus. I just unlocked the church but I don't think the gameplay changes pace so I think I will stop here for now.
I did like the characters for the most part, I hate the tsundere but that is just because I hate tsundere in general.
The dialouge in the game was enjoyable enough but it's not enough to carry the whole game.
I hope my feedback helps you and I do wish you best of luck on developing the game.