Well...
Is it just a few short minutes to warm us up without anything else, or would I have missed something ...? (especially since the part that interested me is just in scribbles ... LOL)
It sounds like a cool game, but short and without anything special ...
For me, I can't really judge much, and even though I find some of these orcs pretty cute, they're not really the type of character that I like ...
Will the rest of the game always be like this, or will there be real adult content? ;-) (I'm kidding of course, since there is some pretty hot writing ...) - by the way, it's an excellent narrative!
Take good care of yourself
I leave you a big hug from Paris
LOVES
John