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Wow, this story definitely caught me by surprise!  The art is wonderful, both characters and backgrounds. I really dug the '80s fashions, too!  And the music sets the mood wonderfully throughout

I did find it difficult to understand the player character's motivations at times; sometimes the way she expressed herself felt a bit too casual for the situations she was in.

Good luck as you keep working on it!  I'm looking forward to playing more of your games!

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate the compliments and feedback!
That's very fair, I think the script could probably use some more work for sure, I hope to fix it up a little when I expand on it and make the characters feel a little more believable! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it otherwise ^^!

Oh cool, I'm glad the comment was helpful!  I didn't want to be too negative about a WIP game, but I also hoped the feedback might be helpful  ^_^

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I'm always happy to have feedback! It's often hard to see where the flaws are in your own work (especially when you've stared at it for so long rip) so I appreciate the extra insight a lot^^