I loved the sketchy art style and sound. Even though you didn't get to finish the story, I was really immersed and enjoyed the story very much! As a demo, I would say it really did a good job and I'm definitely interested in a full game, amazing work :D

I like that you labeled this as a "Demo", because it gives you some breathing room for expansion and I would like to see you expand on it. =)

Amazing UI and interesting story. Even if I'm not a fan of visual novels this one was something. You could finish it the way you like and not have that ending. Say something like 'Episode 1' and have an episode two. You have the functionality. Good job keep it up!

That was cool. I'd definitely be interested in finishing the story if you end up taking the game past the demo. I'd liked the sketchy art and the world you were building.