didn't see this until after the stream but that was super cool! I appreciated all the feedback- a lot of this was me usually using twine/being a writer, so the little nuances of actual game design got shafted in favor of cool narrative things.
also, since I'm an idiot who didn't playtest properly, I realized that the good ending was broken. it's supposed to put you next to the bed in the last room, instead of in the corner. updating that after I post this comment lmao.
thanks!
~Eve6262