Hey, I've made a video about your game and wanted to give you some feedback about it, hopefuly this is useful for the development :D
-The main idea for the game and the visual style are quite good, maybe some work on the visuals could give more personality to the game.-The dynamic for the dialogues between the main character and the voice-over works great :).
-It's hard to understand who exactly are you looking for at the first level.Adding some extra clues (about the location of the target, etc.) could be awesome :)
-At the video I've tested some strange things and I've found some glitches/bugs that literally can actually break the game and you have to totally reset it.
As a summary, I think that you have a game with a lot of potential to end up being a great videogame that I think someone would love to buy :)