Bro it would be great if you made some characters with slimmer faces and tan skinned (you can keep the body's of the girls great job ). it would also be cool if we had the option to block graphic scenes(why lose some audience members when you can have all) .and it would be cool to put in mini games like if you join the soccer team you play mini games that has to deal with soccer and depending on whether or not you win those games the story can change. Even on tests and quizzes it would be great to make the person answer the questions(more interactive)(but give us the answers ahead of time or not just so we can learn from it) and again it can determine the story's direction. i think that there will be dating in the story if not that would be cool if we had a direction or path to date like a side story on the weekends which still can connect with the main story. Still i found the game great minus the graphic scene, God/YHWH/Jesus put it on my heart to give my input to you. Bringing a vision to life is a beautiful thing.
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Thanks for stating your opinion in such great detail! I’m glad you enjoyed the game enough to feel inclined to give all this thoughtful feedback to me, I really appreciate it!
As for your suggestions:
The game protagonists will remain the same, but I’m still adding characters to it and indeed it would be interesting to use some tanned skins to give variety to the cast. I guess their faces could be a bit slimmer, but I’m basically using this kind of anime style with a character maker (I’m not an artist), so that will be a bit more difficult.
By “block graphic scenes” I’m guessing you basically mean “adult” material. Well, the game was conceived since the very beginning as an H-game in itself, and although H-scenes won’t be abundant per se (this is definitely far from being a nukige), they’ll also have their own meaning in the story, so I’m afraid that can’t be helped. I’m not exactly aiming to all audiences here.
Mini games: it would be cool indeed, but on one hand my programming skills are way too limited to implement something of the sort, and on the other hand, that’s not exactly the kind of game I’m designing. I intend to do a visual novel fundamentally story-oriented.
About tests and quizzes, yes, I already implemented some of them and intend to use more (in fact, some are already available in the Spanish version, which is more advanced). I certainly aim to make the game as much interactive as possible, and choices will be indeed the key to decide the story’s direction… and will also let the player learn some interesting things.
And finally, yes, there’ll definitely be dating scenes with the girls, in a more advanced stage. I don’t know if I’ll design them exactly as side stories, but in some cases it would certainly be an interesting option, which I could even include in a choice that the player could follow or not.
And you’re damn right, dude, there’s nothing like bringing a vision to life, and I’m pretty much doing my best to achieve that. Hope I can keep up with it. Again, thank you very much, and see you around!