Firstly, while I did not think it was possible BUT you broke my heart in two chapters(so...thanks?). It was very well placed for as much drama and emotion that is laced in this story so far.
Like so many others I like the MC, and the relationship between "them" and Mathias.
I tried some different options experimenting and was impressed with the subtle differences that each choice builds upon.
I like the black and white it adds to the drama of it all; and it is so rare now days. Perhaps just including them every now then as you feel the situation fits
Looking forward to more!