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I feel like it was too padded (both in the number of days and the numbers of times going up and down without anything happening; plus every night had essentially the same screams).

Other than that, I think this is quite good! I particularly enjoyed the writing, it did more than just point at Lovecraft and included some of his poetic quality.

The FOV was a bit too much, though I understand the purpose to create slight distortions (which became huge ones when close to the textures). Finally, perhaps some "heartbeat" pulsing to the moving textures would have fit a bit better, perhaps? And using texture displacement to create local contractions instead of simple translations would have been nicer, perhaps.


Still, it was quite good, good job!