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I enjoyed your game very much! The graphics are great, and the rotating title screen is clever. A few things I wanted to mention are:

Not sure why the main character is wearing the hat even at work? His casual outfit makes sense when he's out there in the woods, but at work he should have a different outfit? If it's too complicated, I think just removing the hat would be fine. (Same for when he's at home, in bed).

Main character's sprite size doesn't match his coworkers' sprite size.

He should react in some way at the puddles of blood?

When he returns from work, why is he in his bedroom by default? Should be in the living room near the entrance.

The random swearing feels unnecessary at times, I understand he's frustrated but certain comments feel over the top.

Placement of text is sometimes at the bottom, sometimes at the top, should stick with one. Text got covered by items sometimes. 

The huge hospital in the middle of nowhere feels a bit weird but I guess it's possible. A care home or a sanatorium, would be more likely.

There are typos here and there, as well as weird phrasing, if English isn't your native language I could help you proofread it if you'd like? Your game is great and if I can help you in any way I'd love to. Please let me know :D

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100% agree, there are also some other minor issues but if you fix all of those things the game will be alot better, I will def check out the full release