Danger Zone, 'were allowed to enable', and about swag hull, I still think it should be 'an' SRM encrusted hull? It's es-ar-em, right? May be another 'a' in there , too, and maybe where instead of were? I don't have it in front of me right now.. In the smart flechette, I think the same, 'An' End-tech weapon.
It seems homing weapons try to hit wrecks when it's the closest thing, but maybe that's good...
I wrote earlier about the mouse getting sluggish, I think this is specific to items like g-link ammo and maybe teleporting shots. Could be intended, too? Doesn't really seem like much of a feature, though, more like it just stayed from before when there was no mouse aim?