Was a really, really fun game. The atmosphere you built was fantastic and the story behind the game was great too. (Video below if anyone wants to watch!)
Only thing I would suggest is maybe adding a build up to the final monster and making him more visible in the houses or in the distance or things like that. And maybe add little notes in the houses to tell the stories of the people living there and then add up to the whole story as a whole.
And also the picking up was a little annoying at times as the items wouldn't pick up, and some doors would close in and not allow the item to come through.
Other than that, it was a great game with a great feel to it. Would definitely recommend playing it. It was pretty spooky and really well made!