I'm really happy with this update, I gotta say! Getting to see more of the cast interacting with each other was nice. And that spooky event with Klaus in the woods was really interesting to see. I stayed and got the feeling it was going somewhere... interesting, before Lake interrupted.
Also, just wanna say that Rune is such a sweetheart! And so is Lake! And Devon, too!! I'm torn for getting to choose only one of them at a time! They're all just so nice!
With the first day of the camp coming to a close, I'm really interested to see where the story goes from here! As well as how our relationships with the other characters are going to develop in the coming updates.
I don't really have much in the way of critique for this update- at least, not for this update specifically. I didn't notice much in the way of typos or glaring errors this time around, so that's good! The only thing I'd really think to bring up is that the black used on the character sprites - more accurately, the black used for Rune's antlers and any black clothing like his jacket or Jorgen's poncho - comes off as too dark. In most cases, it looks less like the characters are wearing dark clothes and more like someone put the images in photoshop and cut out the clothing; basically, you can't see any detail for anything colored black in the game, with the exception of Devon. If you want to use black for a character's clothing or other details, maybe it would be better to use a shade closer to the darker parts of Devon's fur? Maybe a little darker than that even? Dark enough that we can see they're meant to black, but not so dark that we can't see any actual detail. Just a thought.
Anyways, great work over all this time around! Keep up the good work!