Hello, Thed Games. I like how the screenshots you used make it easy to see what’s going on in your game.
That being said:
- 6 screenshots seem like overkill to me. I think the current #1, #3, and #4 show off what you got the best. I you feel like that’s not enough, consider animated gifs instead.
- You should also think about reducing your link collection and moving it to the end of your presentation. Right now the first link any user will see when they are done with reading your pitch is the “Report” link…
Best of luck.