the idea is amazing and looks great but the other essentials of the game aren't as good
if you feel like it you could easily turn this into a real game after the jam, see how far you can improve on it in just this short "polish" period, maybe make sure the ui is sharp and not so fuzzy, the going from one to the other planet was a bit hard to figure out, maybe add a turtorial.
Anyways keep up the good work but possibly take a little less ambitious idea next time.