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Good work on the updated Demo.
Mostly small bugs/inconveniences in Demo 10-21-2020
Old Saves are broken.  Being an updated Demo that isn't a problem but putting it on the list in case someone wants to know.
Kitchan seems cute but probably should be Kitchen.
A Grocery Store location would be nice to stock the fridge and actually prepare food in the Kitchan.
In the Convenience store 'riceball' should have a capital R to keep the Shop Menu uniform.
For some Shop Items it would be nice to remove the item from the listing if it never re-stocks.
Inventory would be nice if you didn't have to close it to move to another menu.
In the Bathroom after you take a bath it says "I have already taken a bath todayr..." typo in 'today'.
The player can't rest or take a nap in the bed with Fuyuka looking at them but they can go to sleep.  Seems like an odd limitation.
When trying to give Fuyuka gifts this line sounds off "I cannot suddenly accept valuable from a... stranger, thank you... for your kindness." maybe "It wouldn't be right to accept gifts from... strangers, thank you... for thinking about me." However it would be nice to give her some food at least in the beginning as I feel bad all she had was a riceball.
Woke up at Midnight on Day 5 with Fuyuka sleeping in bed.  Went Outside to the Park and it returned me to the Main Menu.
Inviting Fuyuka to the Restaurant would be nice.
I was hyped for Headpats but in the demo it doesn't seem like she likes them...  Also 'Headpat' brings up a sub menu of 'Pat her head' which seems redundant.
Could just be me but getting Fuyuka's Affection up in the new demo seems harder.  Since she doesn't like Headpats I'm going with variable 'fuyuka.romance' to move things along so I can actually give her Headpats and Gifts.
When going to sleep "turn off the lights" should have a capital T.  Though that is more my preference for GUIs having capitalized commands.
On the City Map 'mall' should have a capital M to keep the City Menu uniform.
If the player buys too many different Items it doesn't display right in the Inventory.

I can only eat at the Restaurant now...
Can't give Fuyuka a Bento but I can give her a Luxury Bento.  Seems that giving her food should allow for all foods from cheap to fine dining.
Sometimes when Observing Fuyuka she gets a double image.  This looks like it's caused by two different sitting styles.


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The Demo End was nice.  "activities with Fuyuks" is either a typo or a cute nickname for her.