Warning: Spoiler
So, I'm back after two months! Now reading volume 2 about Blade. This volume really nicely reveals Blade character and his passion of music, especially pop music. I feel more connection with Blade because his trouble and passion are lovely explored. Nice way to introduce your next character by adding a hint of the character next. Also, the shapeshifters are snakes???
There's still no title music, have you thought about adding some common copyright music there? But even if you're not planning to add it it's still okay. Oh by the way, the music placement are improving! I like where you put the music in this situation and that situation! And it sure is easier to differentiate between the mc thoughts and the other character talk.
Blade is really smug at times, but I feel it's because he use it to hide is insecurities. He's as what his sister said, a soft fuzzy ball inside. Can't wait for volume III!