I...hmm...I dunno how to accurately express how I feel, but I will say that the turn this novel has taken is great. I love how Dave is starting to act and think like a real-life person. I like how I can sorta predict the next line of dialogue, like when Sal gives the talk and I was like “What if I don’t want to” and I clicked and Dave said it too. On the same note though, it really sucks that he’s having suicidal thoughts and stuff like his loneliness and overwhelming stress...as someone who knows what that feels like, I’m really looking forward to see how that’s dealt with. As far as plot goes, I feel like if I ask any questions, then I’ll be in for a world of mental hurt, so I’ll hold on that. But keep up the great work!!🐊