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I really love the atmosphere in your game, it's really nice with elements of surprise, creepiness and mystery. I think I am understanding some of what your trying to do, leave me with this dreamy theme impression on what's going on, and I appreciate and like that. I think in some ways you did a good job on it, but it still seemed easy to feel a bit lost and confused, only because I feel we need to be told a little more about the situation or have our main character react a bit more to her thoughts on why she ends up in these different places, more of a reaction from her on her past where you brought it up too. You can keep us not knowing much, but we need to see something more from the main character and get told a bit more so we don't feel a little too lost or too confused if that make sense? This isn't too hard to fix though, I think just reveal a bit more, not everything, you don't have to reveal much either, but just reveal a bit more to what's going on is the answer. It was quite short but I enjoyed the dialogue, walking around, the mapping, and I wanted things to be a little clearer on what's going on outside of that. Overall I enjoyed your short game. I wish you the best of luck with what you choose to do next! : )