Hi, I did enjoy your game a lot, and I think you have a great start going here! The one thing is the English made it a little hard for me to follow along with the story at times. I think if you teamed up with someone who is a native speaker, you could probably make it even better!
Also, at one point the game did error out. The full traceback is below, but it appears it was unable to locate an image file. It should probably be easy to fix, so I thought I'd let you know I was eventually able to continue after hitting ignore, but it was producing other interesting glitches after that!
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While loading <'Image' u'bg_dark/bedroom_2_dark.png'>:
IOError: Couldn't find file 'bg_dark/bedroom_2_dark.png'.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "script_day5.rpyc", line 987, in script
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1387, in execute
renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1592, in with_statement
return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2248, in do_with
clear=clear)
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2699, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3191, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2091, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "render.pyx", line 546, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 247, in renpy.display.render.render
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 154, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 247, in renpy.display.render.render
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\transition.py", line 361, in render
top = render(self.new_widget, width, height, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 154, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 247, in renpy.display.render.render
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 154, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 247, in renpy.display.render.render
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 722, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 154, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 247, in renpy.display.render.render
File "accelerator.pyx", line 110, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
File "render.pyx", line 247, in renpy.display.render.render
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\image.py", line 500, in render
return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\image.py", line 306, in wrap_render
rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 154, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 247, in renpy.display.render.render
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\im.py", line 584, in render
return cache.get(self, render=True)
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\im.py", line 266, in get
surf = image.load()
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\display\im.py", line 629, in load
surf = renpy.display.pgrender.load_image(renpy.loader.load(self.filename), self.filename)
File "C:\Users\user\Downloads\Below_The_Face_Blue-1.0-pc\renpy\loader.py", line 576, in load
raise IOError("Couldn't find file '%s'." % name)
IOError: Couldn't find file 'bg_dark/bedroom_2_dark.png'.
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.2.320
Below The Face Blue 1.0
Sat Sep 26 21:12:31 2020