Some constructive criticism for Lili (I just quickly read though these, I may have missed some things)
https://prnt.sc/ulz3tg (During Lili's Second Relaxation dialogue)
https://prnt.sc/ulz4wm (Same as above)
https://prnt.sc/ulz9gx (Second Theoretical dialogue)
https://prnt.sc/ulza5g (Same as above, not typo just worded incorrectly)
https://prnt.sc/ulzdr0 (Same as above, grammar and spelling)
https://prnt.sc/ulzi8i (Same as above)
https://prnt.sc/ulzj2f (Same as above, spelling)
https://prnt.sc/ulzjzs (Same as above)
https://prnt.sc/ulzla9 (Same as above)
https://prnt.sc/ulzq1d (Same as above, suggestion)
https://prnt.sc/ulzqw4 (Same as above)
https://prnt.sc/ulzt25 (Cutscene)
https://prnt.sc/ulzurk (Same as above)