actually you got a really good concept for this game. I like that you went for a paper Mario type of a style in terms of the characters. but I think the game would be more interesting and fun if there are some quests that we need to do. not just collecting things to progress on the game. but, in terms of the graphics, the sounds of the game, the atmosphere of it. it is way up there my dood :)
p.s game starts at 5:21