hi i have so feedback that could make the novels so much better for everyone that reads it, it might seem a minor thing but to some it could hurt there health, and yes i am talking about the thunder storm seen as it can trigger fits and siezures in people for are photosensetrive a warming a the start of the novel would be a good start, and a way to turn of the white flashing lightning or better yet do it from throught the eyes of jenna and have her on the left side not the right or a warning screen just before thats it happens and takes you to next morning with a brief outline page that he told her a bed time story and she soon feel alseep, as i forgot just how much the flashing light started of a minor headach.
thanks,
GaTeZ.