This is something I want to play.
First, the story starts with an intriguing prompt. Then, the characters are all distinctive, full of character and open enough to add your own vibe.
The system is simple and based on Lady Blackbird & Dungeon World. There's many little things I like about it (the rule of Cool, the open-ness), but it's mainly the structure that got me. Alternating between Journey (Now) and Memories (Then) is a great idea. A really great one!
Last, but not least, the game is full of questions. Meaningful questions. Even ones that can be stolen for other games.
A great piece !