Played the game because saw it on vlad's channel. Previously I liked the preview, but constantly delayed checking the game for later (until completely forgot about it) since it doesn't have a web version (and probably originally it required setup ? I'm not sure).
The story itself is good. The quests are ok (probably I'd prefer something more puzzling, but I guess for a jam their difficulty is reasonable, especially if you want to get playthroughs instead of 'nah, too complicated, probably a bug, goodbuy' )
I like how you have put a pun on most attempts to talk to items.
Things to improve:
1. Greater default speed. I know that there's a setting for the speed, but unfortunately I had discovered it only after completing the game.
2. More readable font. Now the contrast is low and the font itself is very pixelated, even going for retro style doesn't mean that you have to punish player's eyes so hard. I'm not really sure if black outline really helps: on the one hand, it separates the text from the background, on the other hand it makes the characters look even more pixelated. These issues don't work good with auto-hiding text on timeout since it just disappears before you end reading the pixels.
3. Not sure if it can be helped with the game engine you use, but now alt-tab is a disaster, at least on my win7 pc. It doesn't send the game window to background or minimize it, it just leaves the dark gray overlay over your desktop, essentially preventing you from accessing anything else while the game is still opened.