Although this vn starts out kind of scattered and in broken english, it more than makes up for that in the way it allows the mc to explore, while you control, his darkest fantasies. Then in part two it is as if another writer or developer has jumped in. Th story really picks up and leaves you wanting more! If you can 'play' this vn without more than a few laughs then you may have been slipped the slave pill , lol. Congratulations to the developer Milo Haze and I hope the rest of the chapters come before too long.