My two cents: I'd change the names for the various positions; at least, switch Perilous and Desperate. I strongly feel that Desperate is the worst scenario, while Perilous is just... perilous :D
Also, while the icons suggest the moth cycle, I think that those symbols don't move the reader feelings, don't relate with the emotions that the positions try to transmit.
Finally, another personal preference, I'd change the "Devil's Bargain" name. I know the meaning of it, also it's used in BitD, however putting the Devil in "distracts" from the setting flavor. "Grim Pact" "Twilight Bargain" or something more exotic could sound better.
Said so, nice layout and cool art style. Kudos.
PS: in one of the preview pictures up there (Setting Reference) there's a wrong "it's ... satellites".