Pros and cond are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the second there):
Advantages:
1. The game is so much fun. It so hilarious that you get to be brewed alive because that vampire-witch is so damn charismatic.
2. The concept is cool. I've never seen something like that before and I am impresesed.
Disadvantages:
1. When the player is done watching all the mini monologues, there is an awkward lack of anything. Maybe it would be nice to add something? Like vampire sitting on the table and saying "Well, I have nothing more to say to you, but you're almost ready so that's okay".
2. It would be super cool to be able to interact with the vampire a bit more. Like if the player would be able to choose some the answers or the quetions to the vampire-witch.
Overall:
I guess there is still something that can be done to improve the game. But as is, it's also very nice, simple and fun. 5/5. Can't wait to see more original ideas and fun projects from you!
Hope my feedback was useful!