Hey there
i played your game, made a video on it and it was an Awesome RPG game with awesome graphics and the story line was great
however there were some problems that i faced:
1. the health. it does not regenerate and gets over very fast (maybe increase the health or make the health regenerate over time)
2. make the powers a bit more powerful (or increase its capacity)
3. in the 1st scene when we had to get off from a train, we had to press the arrow keys and move and i had no idea what to do, but i eventually found out
4. in the lock picking scene i had to figure out how to pick the lock because i was super confused on what to do but i did it somehow
5. make the powers go in 4 directions (what i mean is that make the powers go up, down, left, right)
6. in the umbrella scene make the people follow range a bit more because i was facing difficulty in making them follow me
6. in the boss fight scene make the health of the enemy a bit less or make it less powerful (that was really fustrating and thus i couldnt get past the enemy)
i guess these were the things that were bugging me out but hey this is a demo so you have plenty of time to improve
heres the video
have fun
:D