Really good drawings. Not the kind of story I usually go for but wanted to give it a try, in order for you to get some feedback. This is definitely a quick sexual VN. There are no choices so you just enjoy the layout. It gets right to the action, so no delay there. I think it would benefit to have more story, if for no other reason than to keep your readers involved and mentioning this I have to ask, why no choices? This is one of the things that attract VN gamer's/readers, by not having any choices you are not involving the player and in today's market, I think it is important to have all the chips on your side you can. But fun reads and very erotic!
Thanks a lot for your feedback! I understand about the choices, and in the next chapters there will be a choice (there's 3 different ends). The main purpose of my "vn's" are more to be seen like comics, but I prefer to use the vn way to told them. But yes, they will be choices available on the next chapters! This Story will have 5 chapters so don't worry, there's more than 60 % of the story to be told ;). Thanks for your support and your feedback! Hope you will like the next chapters.