I love the atmosphere and message you are sending with this game! However, as you said it does need some polish. Your music choice is great, however at times it makes it very hard to hear what you are saying. I very much enjoyed the narrator approach as well, but you may want to supplement his instructions with text or highlights. And lastly as others have said, there are some glitches/complications with the dust boxes. I am impressed with your completing this in one day, and the positive message. Good work.