Hey back again but i have been playing through the routes and im about to finish liens route and while i have no right to critique you i was just wondering if you had an editor of some sort. Its not that you cant go through the stories with the small grammar errors but i do feel it ruins the immersion for the reader. I would be happy to go through the stories again and make a list of where these spots are but like i said its not right for me to say anything about this. Also while on the subject of your game while i think the voice acting for all the characters sound amazing i dont know if you already plan to do this but i think it would be nice to have some background sound something besides just music because without them it feels like all the characters are in some weird enclosed space like their voice exists in some sort of different universe but in all honesty thats all i can really think of besides maybe add some more scenes and options for the player to chose like allowing them to do certain actions like if you read a book or something i dont know you can use that knowledge later to get a secret option. Once again i love your game continue the great work!!!!