(con't)
The art of the corpse was a bit weak, and turned the serious story into a cartoon for a moment. XD I'm sure that's the opposite effect of what you wanted, though.:(
Honestly, after completing this, I thought it was alright. Your sound effects are all great and well placed, but the art is too few and not detailed enough, and some music at least would have increased the tension. For a first Renpy game, this wasn't bad. I look forward to what else you create.
(btw, also in this jam, with my game HummingBird Haunting? Check it out? I'm eager for feedback: norbez.itch.io/hummingbird-haunting)