Ok, the art is great, it's really readable too, but it did take me a couple of goes to realise the water is filling up the McDonalds bag and not the energy bar on the left. The scream is perfect.
The only critique I would have is, it's hard to understand how the rain interacts with the McDonalds? Like, where should I hold my umbrella to make sure the M's not getting wet? It kinda felt random at times.