It has some very nice poetic texts in the game but I had a hard time to get the feeling that I was actually progressing to something. I got stuck at the stage with:
You have the collected memories: the taste of her mouth and skin, and her grey, shipwrecked eyes.
Where I could click any direction yet turn up in this same position and there was no more progress. I wasn't able to get any further than that, so it felt never ending.
The art actually adds to the text in a nice way, they are rough/abstract enough to allow the reader to fill in the rest with their mind. They only show the basis on which I felt I was able to add my own imagination, I think that's good.
It didn't seem to have any music which was a shame, because I think it could have really helped to get some ambience.
Good job!