Thanks! Your video was lovely, I enjoyed watching you play and listening to your reactions. It's also very useful to me as a writer. I hope you keep hating the spooky stuff in the next part!
I just changed a couple of small things after watching you! One was that "s" missing in "darkness" at the beginning. Just a letter, but it's the very first dialogue so I thought it was an important first impression. I noticed thanks to your video, I checked it all several times but it happens. Also, you pointed out that I didn't specify Vail's pronouns when talking about this subject, and I thought that it was a good idea to just say they're "they/them". In Spanish it's already kinda obvious by that point because of how our language is, but in English you can't know until the end of the masks part.