This is a great game, with a great potential. I found few and minor bugs, the instructions were clear, and the gameplay worked very well. Needing to reload isn't fun and doesn't add much to the game, I would have just made it a 5 second cooldown.
Mood was excellent, and getting dragged away at the end was a surprise, but leaves room for a much bigger story.
There were a few visual issues when you walked into walls, but besides that it's great.