Game has alot of potential I had fun with what you've got done but a few things i recomend but this is all just my opinion
- Make first person able to get a little closer
- Have an outline toggle because the character outlines made things look a little less detailed on the models
- Remove the camera snap for characters (i'm a perv who tries to look up skirts in games)
- A help screen/options menu for volume and the like
Last thing is just a question of what monster girls do you plan on adding in the future?