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So I streamed this with my discord friends and it was fun.

Some criticism that I'd give is that some of the scenes felt way too stretched out with details and dialogue. That's part of the reason why I cut out a lot of dialogue in the video.

Otherwise, I can see a lot of potential in the story.

It gives me a Blackgate kind of vibe (minus the fact that game is never gonna be finished) where the Human Protagonist unexpectedly appears in another world full of anthros and humans are rare. It's those kinds of plots that I love so much.

Minus the overly stretched scenes, I like this Visual Novel and I hope that this game goes further in story.

Oh man, wasn't expecting someone to upload their playthrough this early in development. Hope you had a decent time testing it out with your friends!

Are some scenes really too stretched out? Personally, I've always liked novels that contain extra details although I do understand where you're coming from so I'll keep that in mind!

My writing could use some work but I'll see what I can do. ^^

Regardless,thanks for spending your time testing the Demo and for creating that video. I've learned a couple of things to keep in mind for further developments that I might not be able to get otherwise.

Cheers,

-D