Some criticism that I'd give is that some of the scenes felt way too stretched out with details and dialogue. That's part of the reason why I cut out a lot of dialogue in the video.
Otherwise, I can see a lot of potential in the story.
It gives me a Blackgate kind of vibe (minus the fact that game is never gonna be finished) where the Human Protagonist unexpectedly appears in another world full of anthros and humans are rare. It's those kinds of plots that I love so much.
Minus the overly stretched scenes, I like this Visual Novel and I hope that this game goes further in story.