Page 86: “Rage as you watch your hard work turned the benefit of others.” Possibly missing a “to”, “for”, or other similar term.
Page 86, prompt 25: The gender pronouns of the poet change from they to him and back again.
Page 86, prompt 28: A bit pedantic, but “You meet a good-hearted traveler on a noble quest on a crossroads…” should be “at a crossroads”
Page 87, prompt 34: “Check a skill and to fail to put them on the proper path.” – the first “to” is a typo, or the “and” shouldn’t be there.