Nice music, wish it changed a little when something big happened
Did you write this story yourself? There's a few typos (which can be distracting) such as "scared" which should be "scarred"
Also, I would personally prefer to see which page I'm on and how many pages there are in total somewhere on the screen
Yes, I wrote it. I did the actual writing as part of the 3h and english is not my first language, so I missed a lot of typos the spell check didn't catch.
That's also why everything else is very bare-bones as well. Maybe if I try this again I'll do the story off the clock and spice up the visual/audio experience.
Thanks for the feedback :)
