This is a cute little game, and I like the art and music a great deal. "We must go out and defeat the monsters" and then smash cut to our heroine being a cyclops was a great gag, and the excuse plot works well.
My main issue is a technical one: unless it's a problem on my end, the font you've chosen just flat out clashes with the rest of the visual design. Consider using a serif font like Garamond or any of these for a more storybook look.