Great song!! Really like the instrumental, the guitars are kinda washy in a nice way, really saturates the sound, good punchy drums. It's a little heavy/dense on the mids in the mix, but I don't think that's a bad thing at all for this genre/style, though maybe the bass could come up a little more, to bring out a little more fullness. Love the lyrics, I'm a sucker for this kind of wistful reflective storytelling. Really cool song, especially for your first finished original! Keep it up!!