As I've mentioned on YT: Congrats on releasing the song! With such mv it has a great anime ending vibe, and vocal melody is really nice! Good job ^^
This song sounds really nostalgic and melancholic which I really like!
To make the song even better I'd suggest to play with instrument layers and also to try clean up the music intervals a bit, sometimes some notes here and there could be removed or slightly changed and it'd make the song shine!
This song has potential for sure, thank you for making it!