finally got around to this! i dont think i have anything to add that the other comments havent already and i hope i can put down some coherent thoughts/remember everything well enough given its 2 am lol
i really want to laud the visual presentation of this vn, love love LOVE your art style and character designs for daizy and anisia a lot. the latter has SUCH a cute gothic lolita fit, im a big fan ;o;
the lil glitchy sprite effects that have popped up occasionally i also liked - initially i was wondering if that was a bug but no it became pretty clear they werent, especially given there were more towards the end with mammillaria having more power over daizy with time.
daizy and anisia's relationship in particular was super interesting/sad/dreadful to read, great characterization - i liked that the more sinister nature of anisia's behaviour wasn't all that obvious at first, kind of a frog in a boiling pot situation (or at least for the reader) and an interesting juxtaposition to the mother-daughter dynamic between daizy and her mom
as a bit of criticism from my end, i am missing a bunch of quality of life features in this vn. i wouldve really liked text rollback for instance, even just getting my mouse up to the top left corner to open the menu and click "history" is a TINY bit of extra effort that summed up after a while. i think generally having the menu only accessible through clicking on a button (rather than the standard right click) did the user experience (or Gamer Experience ig lol) a disservice
these are more benign quality-of-life criticisms, i still wanna go on record and say i rly enjoyed this <: