Really really cool!! LOVE the outro instrumental, really pretty piano writing. The beat, in general, is catchy, very danceable. I don't think I've heard a song with Mai before, but I think I'm going to check out some other stuff with her now, the voice sounds really nice. I do also really like the lyrics! Very poignant and tragic. If you do continue working on this after the Jam, I'd be excited to hear how much better you could do with even more time, it's already great!