I looove your writing! And the way you sync up the visuals with the text is also super effective, knowing that clicking forward will show something new in the scene definitely made moments more tense. The overall effect is super immersive and cinematic. I especially love the leaving-the-train scene and Pusturnik's introduction, with each thing getting revealed piece by piece and the visuals changing progressively with the text. It's also cool how Soika's dialogue skips forwards when she's speaking fast. I think this'll be a great format for a longer story for sure!! The point-and-click elements are also super promising, as well as the personality bar (maybe you could hide it most of the time and fade it in for a few seconds when a decision causes it to change, if it's not something the player will need to reference often). This was a really cool demo and I'm excited to see how it develops!